Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
Children up bringing has been an important factor since the down of time. Throughout history, that is a controversial issue that children should stay home until they are six or seven years old. While, other think it is better to go to school from young age. Thus, high percentage of people agree that children should go to school as soon as possible. These days, most of the parents work and put their children in nursery schools from much younger age. It May be children can't spend more time with their parents but going to school from younger age has many advantages that I will discuss about them.
Firstly, children in school can play with other students and learn new things, and they socially developed faster. While at home it is impossible because of younger and older sisters or brothers, or maybe they are an only child. For instance, my friend's child is alone at home from morning to night and watch television. As this show, his child is depressed and solitary.
In addition to this, when children go to school from younger age, they can learn how to communicate with other students or strangers. This makes it clear that they can experience unknown situation and be more independent than children who stay home with parents. Thus, children who stay home at the first day of school frightening new environment and circumstances that it can result to have a bad impact on their learning.
In conclusion, it is obvious from this that children attend to school at younger age is very beneficial to be the sociable and independent people in society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... until they are six or seven years old. While, other think it is better to go to scho...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...om much younger age. It May be children cant spend more time with their parents but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78148148148 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51318880505 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7118682825 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36264008705 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133801983714 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798518551597 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211064684632 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869006340084 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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