Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
As the development of computer network, the online meeting, seminar or discussion have sprung up and become popular. The question is that do the benefits of online communication outweigh the drawbacks of itself? This essay will take a close look at both aspects before demonstrating that conferencing online has more conveniences than inconvenience.
To start with, using computer network to hold a online meeting offers a variety of advantages. Firstly, because computer technology can easily to access to the internet that provide the feasible way for the international enterprises to open their international conferences, ignoring the geographical distances and this will help them to minimize their running cost efficiently. Moreover, by opening the online discussions, people do not have to travel a long distance in other to get to the holding places, whereas they can stay in their locations and enjoy the meeting comfortably and the demand of using vehicles will be decreased, which help to keep the level of pollutants down, taking steps to solve the environmental issues.
On the other hand, although the online conferencing can be useful, they have several drawbacks. In fact, spending long period of time on the electronic divides can cause serious health issues such as: obesity, depression and eye diseases. Besides that, internet and computer are essential for holding the online conferences but they are unstable, so a bad internet connection will interrupt your discussion immediately. The truth is that, by using the smart divides in the conferences, there are lots of distractions that could lead to the low concentration and negative effects of multitasking. And this is responsible for the poor quality of the discussions.
In conclusion, online communication provides a convenient way to communicate as well as to improve the environment. Therefore, Its benefits can overpowering the drawbacks of itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48829431438 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18098355715 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4144194373 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102770558885 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413536543901 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474248649493 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685510671075 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474630798599 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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