Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
At the present day, people have more conversations via the internet in many contexts, such as business meeting, discussions, and learning. In this essay, I will outline both positive and negative aspects associated with online communication.
Several benefits of internet-based communication can be identified. For one thing, the internet gives a rise to convenience in a way that the meeting or training can occurred at anytime at any distance. In this day, people can have a meeting via the internet by using smart phone, and lap top whenever it would be. Since it does not require each attendances to meet in the same time at the similar place, people’s lifestyles are easier. What is more, it is not needed for the information senders and receivers to communicate in a real-time basis. The shared knowledges and informations can be provided in the internet which can be acknowledged later. The good example of this is the e-learning system which the lecturers post their teaching clips to the e-learning platform. Accordingly, the course takers can follow these lesson later anytime they want.
On the other hand, there are various drawbacks from communication via internet. First, without face-to-face communication could result a lost in some context understanding, especially the emotional senses and feelings. Due to a lack of tones, and gestures, there might have some unclear contexts in explaination. As a result, even though there is a technology facilitating people to communicate online, the important meeting are still be held in a real place like a parliament’s meeting. In addition, the disclosure of information in the internet might be unsecure. Seeing that there are many disruptions, such as an information hack, fraud tools in the internet, some confidential contents might be passed through other unintentionally.
In conclusion, the online communication has several benefits and drawbacks. It can facilitate our people’s life much compared to the offline basis but the security of information could be a concern. However, in my opinion I think the benefits outweigh drawbacks due to the convenience factor which is valuable in all areas of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, so, still, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, for one thing, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35652173913 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26405126581 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7415281215 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2631578947 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.89473684211 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0315036870346 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0110748534496 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192131996023 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283509795265 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236659512072 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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