The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, the news reporters tend to focus on problems and emergency issues rather than positive developments in our society. Some people believe that this could harm both individuals and our society as a whole. I agree to the certain extent, however there are some definite issues to consider which will be further discussed in this essay.
Broadcasting social problems in the media give a rise to several negative effects to our society. First and foremost, it would be a bad example to follow especially for childrend. For example, there is suicide news on television which was seen by childrend. This might be the case that those young who have school problems, or problem with their parents will be encouraged indirectly by contents in television to commit a suicide when they are alone using methods from the media. Another point is that reporting bad situations in inappropriated level brings about a mental effect to some people. For instance, some people avoid to travel by boat due to receiving several boat accidences news in that time.
On the other hand, problems in our society spreaded via medias resulting in various positive effects. First, it would be a trigger for many people to realize their responsibility to protect our society from current issues. For example, people receive news related to the increasing rate of drug abuse problem among teenagers leading to finding a way to teach their childrend to have a good behavior and live without drug. What is more, these news will also result in people being up-to-date and well-prepare for the problems they have to face in their life. The PM 2.5 dust is a good example for this claim. In Thailand, there is a rise of PM2.5 dust which harm people health in Bangkok, capital city. According to the news in media, many Bangkok resident aware of this situation and finding ways to protect themselve and their family.
In conclusion, social problems news in media could bring many negative effects to our society especialy that it would be a bad example for childrend and could effect to people’s mind. Nevertheless, it would be an effective way to encourage people to protect our society and prepare of any threat to their life. In my opinion, I think the benefits of focusing on reporting our social problems outweigh drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...or and live without drug. What is more, these news will also result in people being up-to-...
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Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...d their family. In conclusion, social problems news in media could bring many negative...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...e a bad example for childrend and could effect to people's mind. Nevertheless, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97416020672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64617146536 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8265777213 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.315789474 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211890951973 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713047044605 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684798158542 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149329336882 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805079658272 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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