Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial issues about whether student should study with their friends or alone. In this essay, I will examine both sides of these views and my opinions will be also provided.
Many benefits from group studying can be identified. First, the knowledges and ideas will be shared and exchanged in the group. Each child has their own preferences as well as ideas to contribute to their class apart from teacher’s lessons. Accordingly, the new ideas can broaden their horizon and will be used to adapt in their works or their daily life. Moreover, students could have a social life skill. Since it differs from being with their parents who have 100% opened-mind to understand their child, the students will realize the important of opened mindset to accept other’s opinions. In the same way, they will learn to share and help each other when doing the tasks or facing the problems.
On the other hand, study alone also contributes various positive impact to students. First, they will have more concentration in what they do or read. Seeing that there is nobody who distracts their focus in what they are doing, they can have a deeply understanding in the lessons and their homeworks. This could lead to the child having a better learning development and other related skills. In addition, study alone ensures the students having a freedom in ideas development and their interests which are crucial for our country’s development. In this recent years, there are several disruptions in many areas especially a rapid change in technological advancement. Thus, the new ideas and innovations from these new generation could contribute to a greater country’s development.
In conclusion, there are various advantages of either study alone and study with friends. However, in my opinion I encourage the students to study as a teamwork for having a social skill and also receiving new ideas from friends who come from different background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.178125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82123643107 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5248436758 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0555555556 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164343916116 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592967347124 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498796750216 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124940775613 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443321477219 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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