Restricing air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. Do you agree?
Nowadays, the main problem which humans need to solve is the polluted environment. A group of people supposed that limiting travel by airplane is the only way to curb air pollution. From my point of view, I do not totally agree with this idea because several reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that airplanes also contribute in polluting environment like other mean of transports. In reality, airplanes use the fossil fuel, so there is a certain amount of CO2 which them release into environment. Due to that, CO2 trapping into atmosphere is rising day by day and causing green house.
On the other hand, not only airplanes but also other factors could pollute the environment. Initially, besides restricting air travel, government should have another method to curb air pollution. One of the solution is encouraging people in using public transport instead of private vehicles like motor bikes or cars. It could decrease a massive amount of CO2 emission from individual vehicles. Further more, preventing deforestation is also protect the environment. In fact, trees help the Earth to absorb quantity of CO2 in atmosphere and emit O2 that humans need to survive.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why cause the air pollution. However, to protect environment, besides limiting air travel, government should have another method to solve these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'protected'.
Suggestion: protected
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20814479638 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80655356272 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.45347155 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241150219584 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800364080031 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110282025698 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156971305857 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980661225249 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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