As a result of tourism and increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights.
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problem?
The demand for flights is increasing as the number of tourists and travellers is rising. This essay will explain that more planes in the sky lead to air pollution and raising the price of air tickets is one of the solutions to tackle this problem.
Air travel is going up as more people want to visit other countries to explore more about other nations. In addition to this, a plane takes much less travel time compared to other modes of transportation, therefore people like to take flights to reach their destination within a nation and internationally. As a result, more planes fly and use a much larger amount of fuel in comparison to other vehicles. This causes the emission of harmful gases which pollute the air and causes damage to the protective ozone layer of the earth. For example, according to The New York Times, in the last decade aeroplanes have contributed more than 40% of total air pollution as compared to 20 years ago when it was only 7%.
The one measure to deal with this issue is by increasing the price of air tickets. When the prices of air travel will go up, fewer people will buy tickets and as a result, fewer people will travel by flight. This will decrease the number of flights in the air which ultimately causes less air pollution as less jet fuel will be used. This is to say that less burning jet fuel means less release of dangerous gases in the air. For instance, in The Netherlands, in the last 5 years, less than 15% of people have travelled internationally as the government has doubled the air ticket price to control air travelling.
To conclude, although travelling by plane saves time and brings people together internationally, however, the air pollution caused by jet fuel is one of the major problems and this can be solved by increasing the cost of air tickets.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65420560748 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64921356414 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479750778816 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8467222398 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230589583738 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997031786824 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613919480488 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17006783929 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404519367026 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.