As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is an growing demand for more flights. What problem does this have on the environment ? What measures could be taken to solve the problem ?
Due to the developments in aircraft facilitating foreign traveling, more flights are needed to meet this growing demand. In my opinion, this phenomenon can lead to two main negative effects: the shortage of fuel and pollution. In this essay, I would like to suggest green technologies and imposing policies as two feasible solutions.
Firstly, the increase in the number of flights means that more fuels are consumed, as a result, it could cause a lack of energy inputs in certain industries. Furthermore, since the amount of fossil energy resources are limited, which can not meet with this sudden growing demand so that the cost of fuel is likely to rise to cope with it. As a result, this will impact the lives of many citizens, whose jobs depend on the price of fuels, such as drivers and delivery businesses. For instance, if the prices of fuel go up, drivers can not afford to fuel their car; small businesses would have to add extra-fees for the transportations, which reduces the profits. Secondly, air traveling is indeed responsible for most air pollutions. According to science articles, a plane generates the amount of exhausted gas more than that of five hundred cars. Besides, the airport’s vicinities are impacted by the noise of planes, it causes mental health problems for the local people.
To deal with these problems, green technologies come in as appropriate solutions. By investing in green energies, the government will have alternative resources to supply industries, including air transportation. Because the abundance of energy leads to drops in fuel prices, as a result, it improves the economy by facilitating the local good transportations. For instance, in Germany, scientists have invented electricity planes, hoping it will change this business and make it more affordable. Also, the authorities should consider limiting the number of flights allowed per day in airports, to reduce the pollution caused by planes. Also, there have to be specific time frames for each flight to avoid generating too much noise at certain times, so that people’s lives cannot be impacted. In some countries, only twelve flights are allowed to fly per day, being separated in certain times of day, to help reduce the negative impacts of airports on the environment.
In conclusion, increases in air transportation cause pollution and the shortages of fuel; however, this could be resolved just by green energies and imposing proper policies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2040302267 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93402553831 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566750629723 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7772435853 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.777777778 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230198457718 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656473367898 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452549918802 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131598399494 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337251365091 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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