The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is undoubtedly true that the modern living is increasingly heading in a fast pace stage. While the existence of the fast foods made life easier, I believe that it has some serious drawbacks to consider. It is agreed that the disadvantages of obesity-related diseases outweigh advantages of effortless food preparation as it will be discussed.
The prime advantage of the easily ready to eat foods is the time essence. Since most of the people are working or engage in some activities, relying on ready cook foods will make them manage their time effectively. For example, in the recent survey at the University of Brisbane, respondents who are mostly students in the higher years at the university, agreed that an enormous amount of time was saved by simply consuming foods available in the fast food chains. In contrast, if the student will cook every meal for themselves, the time that they can be devoted to studying will be lessened.
The main disadvantage of fast food’s recipe is its nutritional content which is rich on fats. This unwanted bad cholesterol in the body will not be burned and will possibly cause obesity especially for the younger generation. For instance, in the research study at the Medical Hospital of Canada claimed that 80% of the patients who are at a high risk of the chronic diseases like diabetes and heart disease are consuming a great amount of fast food. This is clearly evident that the long-term consumption of fast foods will lead to a very serious medical conditions in the future.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of a severe medical illness for long time consumption of fast foods outweigh the advantage of less effort in the preparation of food.
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.134615384615 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121794871795 0.0946595960268 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0352564102564 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320512820513 0.0437548338989 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.166666666667 0.122226691241 136% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0403226058552 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86424039669 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0128205128205 0.0326793684256 39% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121794871795 0.0861772015684 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025641025641 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97202797203 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342657342657 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188811188811 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136363636364 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86424039669 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.1201535777 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8333333333 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5689054639 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 127.492653851 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.7564102564 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.26984126984 1.69124875643 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482208159446 0.332605444948 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12230292096 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0736521459582 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64448217581 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136567882602 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246957428891 0.134430193775 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959012500755 0.0742795772207 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.476646530057 0.324371583561 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0784693368529 0.0638462369009 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37297402151 0.228012699653 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268354290155 0.058150111329 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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