With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Almost any day of the week we can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing an enormous growth of the internet popularity and how this trend affects mass media in general.

There are several points of view on this matter. The first claims that newspapers will disappear soon due to the fact that the internet sources of information are more convenient and available for free. An alternative point is based on the opinion that traditional media sources are beneficial.

On the one hand, it is obvious that the internet provides various sources of news and other types of information in the most satisfactory way. Meanwhile newspapers may present materials in the line with political or any other view of the editors. It does not matter whether you like it or not, you have to recognize the fact that in the global web you can see different views and opinions on different websites. Moreover, nobody can deny that when you read an article in a newspaper you can only writers’ views and opinions.

However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that newspapers are still the best media source and they will never give up their positions. It can be argued that some tabloids have strong authority and people can rely on them for the truth. But it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case.

From my point of view, the former opinion makes sense definitely, as it follows from my own experience. In any way, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her background.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84671532847 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70827511819 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4438451066 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137641828313 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437168737981 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465655238844 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696585197137 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046018607836 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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