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samll shops in towns and villages are closing and replaced by big stores explain your opinion do you think it is good or bad ?

Irrefutably, in this era plethora of people prefer to buy a thing small shops and big malls in twons and also a village for their necessity. But a lot of places where small shops are replaced by big malls. In my opinion,I think that it is a good way for everyone because everyone has a to chance for buy good things. So many merits outweigh the demerits related to these alternation shops.
To begin with there are abundant of predominant advantages regarding replacing small shops. first and foremost improve the employment ratio because of increasing marketing size, sales,malls, showrooms, and all.Thus shopkeepers are higher the worker for working in big store. The second reason high demand in those areas.Hence people easily buy all think in one roof. for instance no need to go far away places and weast our time.
Moreover, there also some drawbacks to replacing small store in our city and also a village.firstly, immensely poor people can not affordably buy expensive goods in big malls just because branded shops are very high cost and there is the reason small shops do not replace in the place of a big market.for example, according to surveys many middle-class families are choosing small shops rather than big malls.Secondly decreasing environment problems for dropping craft areas and also less cutting trees. In addition to this abundant of poor people are making their own business so they can fulfill their necessities.
In recapitulation, although I certainly believe that big shops for a good way to invest in our community but some also drawbacks related to replacing small shops for poor people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g size, sales,malls, showrooms, and all.Thus shopkeepers are higher the worker for w...
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...econd reason high demand in those areas.Hence people easily buy all think in one roof...
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...econd reason high demand in those areas.Hence people easily buy all think in one roof...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02973977695 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7980244824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.682500084 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5454545455 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204356535187 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760847104845 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063021466086 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138185441282 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413604913514 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments