Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life Why is this trend occurring What are the impacts of this development on both family and society | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.
Why is this trend occurring?
What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?

Nowadays, in this contemporary era abundant of youth generation decide for the life to plan children later in life because in this generation has very busy in their life schedule in the career and business. so, they do not have a lot of time for family planning thus there are a lot of reasons why is this development happens and which are the impacts of this development on both families and the community.
To begin witho[there are a lot of predominant reasons why does trend occurs. first and foremost, many males and females have focused on their life careers also they have busy in their life schedule such as business so that's why they do not prepare for family planning. The second reason, many women and men earn high money before they planing childbirth. in addition to this, ample of women work in different fields and they are well-educated so they think something in her life before family planning. for instance, a plethora of females and males explore a different place and they have a dream to travel a lot of places so that's the reason for the late planning for childbirth.
Moreover, there are a lot of reasons why is this type of trend impact is this development on both side families as well as the community. firstly, it can be more arduous for older Women to get pregnant and they may be more health problems such as a miscarriage, high blood pressure, or diabetes during the pregnancy. secondly, the parents may be whole experience a bringing of children more trying if they are older. Although, it is positive for society because if people are choosing to work for a longer period, increasing the economic level in the country. However, the negative side in the long-term fertility problems will aging population with a lack of young people to take care of the elderly.
In recapitulation, there are a plethora of reasons why many males and females do not prepare for family planning at the earliest age also there are some negative impacts for early pregnancy due to some negative ailments arise.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63008043391 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471590909091 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5502843281 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304783126498 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115532423908 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10763267745 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192790197522 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999301148284 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments