Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society.
Nowadays, some family almost have decision to having a baby’s late. This essay will examine both side of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of parent have decision to have children later in life. First, getting married and decided to have children, it is up to the family and they are believed that have children later will have many time for work and their life among modern life, most of them are young parents who are not ready to have baby. This have children late support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall work employment of the era needs a lot of manpower but also to mitigate their feeling of stress out because when having children too soon, many people think that it makes them miss too many opportunities, which eventually promotes comfortable society. Second, postponed parenthood are not confined to the erosion of family happiness would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that have children soon wouldn’t make them grow by not having children.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once parents have children late. First, all people have trends to decide have a baby late would likely correspond with a tremendous financial on a country. Generating no income from school tuition and fees, the birth rates is too low and not qualified to teach, school could become over-reliant on the state for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as the healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, the rate of having children is too low would lack of manpower, because the previous generation will get old and need a new generation that is more active, thereby that make a trends for young family and potentially late childbirth may affect the genitals and make it difficult to foster family affection, that these young parents could have spent pursuing more suitable solve problem. It, instead, would be a more have children viable option if the family were focused on supporting family plan in modern life.
I was discussed both sides of the argument about effect and cause. In my opinion, this decide will give many disadvantages development and family for society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...eved that have children later will have many time for work and their life among modern li...
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Line 3, column 724, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a trend' or simply 'trends'?
Suggestion: a trend; trends
... that is more active, thereby that make a trends for young family and potentially late c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05655526992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58895314985 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555269922879 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.797094057 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7857142857 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329918104895 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12552025919 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646489519179 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207039587875 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586591455874 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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