Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world, people hold different views about whether parents should apply homeschooling or not send their offsprings to traditional schools. I personally disagree with the idea that just only stay at home and obtain knowledge from the Internet, the children could become a successful people in the future.
On the one hand, There are several reasons why some critics believe that E-learning and home-based education are advantageous in certain ways. This is because the learners are able to access almost any information they need. This is well illustrated by the fact that a Vietnamese student just sitting in his private room can figure out how children in Africa are combating with the daily poverty and a high schooler in the US can easily look up information about the trend of development amongst ASEAN countries. However, in an enormous amount of information, it is likely that children find themselves disoriented. It is not to mention misleading information, which is popularly found on uncensored websites. In contrast, at school, learners receive guidance and explanations for particular topics provided by well-qualified teachers.
Nevertheless, I personally support the idea that the children should go to school. The ones are not only a place of knowledge-centred education but also a miniature society where children are able to make friends with their classmates, which equips them vital interpersonal skills and builds their future social relationships. On contrary, individuals who apply homeschooling have limited social connection and perhaps they have rarely extracurricular activities to participate in. In addition to that, learners would receive formal education include academic knowledge and moral lessons such as politeness, honesty and respect towards older people. Without schooling, children may not comprehensively develop into useful citizens.
In conclusion, home-based education has its own good sides. However, I concur that the children should go to schools to get thoroughly both academic knowledge and other social skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65923566879 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14529909642 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5759761695 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184180349076 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524495108063 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473999168149 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102509599658 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452590038004 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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