Nowadays, education is very necessary for each individual. Education institutions have focused on academic breakthroughs and cracking examinations. While fundamental skills should be learned at home rather than in school,As far as I am concerned, I totally disagree with this notion, and I would argue that teaching practical skills is essential.
Firstly, it is true that all students will not be able to get a job in this highly competitive job market; therefore, teaching fundamental skills to kids is essential. As a consequence, they are likely to become wage earners. Furthermore, not all students are capable of passing exams; those who are unable to pass an exam consider themselves failures.For example, a survey conducted by Leds Trinity College discovered that 25 out of 100 students have excellent exam skills, while the remaining 75 are unable to achieve academic subjects.
Furthermore, some skills are difficult to learn at home because of a lack of equipment. Woodworking, for example, necessitates a number of tools and protective clothing that are not readily available at home.Although universities charge students tuition, they also provide education on practical skills with safety as well as skills taught under safe conditions.As well as this, children will never learn skills at home if they have busy parents. As an example, the Times of India reported that the majority of children lack a fundamental skill due to their parents' busy schedules.
To sum up, I disagree that students should only consider academic study because both academic learning and practical skills are important and should be taught at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37209302326 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02867730946 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9824474077 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226357133518 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089578676591 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999461140169 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170679979767 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107280996099 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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