Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the states rather than private businesses. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits for the populations life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that the requirement of individuals have increased gradually, so the governments is hugely significant for the scientific's development. Not only will they provide numerous talent scientist for their neccessary campaign, which improve their economic background, but also various valuable research or interesting phenomenon can be found, advanced the mentality life of adolesence. Furthermore, socioeconomic trouble will be narrowed dramatically where all postgraduate have the same opportunity to approach with the amazing phenomenon of scientific. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Richart Lee, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the success of european nations where the government are really pay attention in the scientific problem. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every countries has got plenty of achievement
However, we can not negate the drawback of government when compare with private companies. The states have a lot of fields that they need to concentrate such as medical, entertainment or education, so they can not focus too much on the scientific research. Moreover, many government take advantage from the science's investment for their own revenue, harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The government need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the development of their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50511945392 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07537887861 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9451638747 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.416666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191927621282 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781890071792 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126239131044 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125519960068 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871015225488 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.