The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
There are a lot of computer scientists who are convinced that when computers become
many times faster than they are now, and more complex, they will be more intelligent than
human beings. Some take it as a blessing where as others take it as a curse. In the following
paragraphs I shall discuss both viewpoints and finally give my opinion.
On the positive side, computer machines or robots can do lots of jobs for human beings and
this saves the labour force to be engaged in other aspects. More and more automated
machines have replaced human labour. Computer manages our banks and the tickets at the
airport are issued by machine-robot. In addition, the robots have entered offices,
departments and houses to help people to work easily and to enjoy longer leisure hours in
their own homes. The computerization certainly relieves human beings from heavy labours.
What is more, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the limitation of human beings
such as trembling of human hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better
done with the help of robotic surgeons.
On the downside, if intelligent machine-robots replace human being’s work then this would
cause many to out of work. Unemployment would further cause a lot of problems. What is
more, people would rely too much on computers and become lethargic which would lead to
problems such as obesity. Finally, robots may dominate our world just like what is shown in
our science fiction movies of today.
I believe that computers hold much more information than the human brain possibly can,
but the collective information that is found there came from large groups of human brains
around the world. Without the human brains, computers wouldn’t be available to gather
that information. The computer only has information if a human being adds to the system. A
computer can think to some extent. You can ask it questions and it will give you an
automated answer. It cannot touch the human brain though. Experience is sometimes a
better answer than the mechanical version of it. Human brains certainly outweigh
computers because computers can’t feel. Technology will never be able to create something
that could surpass the incredibly complex and ever changing human.
In conclusion, Artificial Intelligence has both positive and negative effects. What we must do
is make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and negative ones are eliminated as far
as possible. After all it is in our hands not to become slaves of our own technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, then, after all, in addition, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16746411483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72225257767 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7843223156 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0769230769 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310607196078 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800396787799 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600537812541 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733531527737 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522265366238 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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