There are many ways to find a job: newspaper advertisements, Internet job search Web sites, and personal recommendations. What do you think is the best way to find a job? Why? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, many companies have different ways to offer jobs to people through advertisements, internet or recommendations from their employees. But personally, I believe that the Internet is the most effective way for people to get a job.
It is obvious that Internet is available anywhere in the world because of the Internet revolution. First of all, I mention that you can find job easier with a phone, laptop or something else which has network connection at anywhere and anytime you want. The association with accessible ability is speed of information which search engine responses to you. With the Google Search Engine and keyword you want to look for, getting enormous results that relative to your field is normal. In addition, because of the appearance of numerous pages which play a role as third-party, it is more convenient for both sides, the company can put jobs in there and the candidate has many choices to find the best job that suitable for their capacity.
Nonetheless, it is irrefutable to note that benefits which advertisements and recommendations are bringing to candidates. All of newspaper advertisements are carefully censored before being published, so you can avoid being cheated by the person or company that has a low reliable. Or taking a recommendation from your relatives is the best way to mitigate the amount of time you find a job by yourself. Instead of looking for job, you can spend this time for improving your knowledge to get a successful interview.
In conclusion, I totally agree that finding jobs in the Internet is the best way for people to approach the company they want to apply for in the age of Industry 4.0.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nonetheless, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97132616487 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99047618346 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6509970536 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332283493482 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127740303964 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804102154427 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218319443429 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175385567942 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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