Scientist tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
It is argued by some that there are some activities helping to improve our health and others are negative. Although many people realize that fact, they still do unhealthy activities continuously. There are manifold explanations for this tendency in tandem with a variety of solutions.
To begin with, there are two culprits leading to the fact that people choose doing unhealthy activities. In terms of/Regarding food, people tend to consume fast food since its convenience. For instance, with eating junk food, people can save time to prepare for breakfast. For a long time, this habit will lead to obesity and other diseases. Furthermore, smoking is also one of the unhealthy activities that most people do. To be specific, smoking has been proven to be the main reason causing lung cancer, however, smokers cannot reduce their dependence on cigarettes because of its addictiveness.
Nonetheless, the problems above could be solved if the following steps are taken. Firstly, healthy lifestyles should always broadcast and be promoted in order to improve the awareness of people. As a result, with a sense of self-protection, sooner or later, people would change their negative habits. Secondly, the government should impose higher taxes on cigarettes. Chances are that consumers will not want to spend much money on such things which not only disadvantageously affect on their health but also need a huge amount of money.
In conclusion, people still do unhealthy activities in spite of knowing its negative effects stemming from its convenience and addictiveness. However, there are some ways to mitigate adverse effects such as relying on media to enhance people’s awareness and increasing taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34944237918 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91292822447 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2984132737 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271897158084 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847097388231 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737619040408 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172767699994 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10259140027 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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