Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Eating junk food is increasing day-by-day and it cause many diseases. Scientists agree that masses are damaging their health by eating too much fast food. Majority of people think that the solution to this trouble is to educate people. However others say that education will not work. I will shed some light on both the approaches as well as give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, health issues are rising by unhealthy food. If people will get knowledge about the obstacles cause by street food through some awareness classes. They may eat less fast food in future. By giving negative impact about junk food and telling then process of digestion by taking junk food can able to help them to avoid fast food. Education also teach people regarding different types of disease cause by many types of junk food. AS a result education helps them to avoid fast food.
On the flip side, other think education can not able to help them to leave fast food. Many masses can not able to afford education regarding fast. Moreover, many families are under poverty line for them these types of classes are difficult to afford. Masses are very busy with their daily routine works they do not have enough time to attend classes.
To put it in a nutshell, I want to say that government should arrange a free seminars for all people toward bad impact by having fast food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... toward bad impact by having fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24047366024 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6956007081 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364271071313 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126167452124 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886158653554 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224031611422 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170691151801 0.056905535591 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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