Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
Thinking of computers being more intelligent than humans is absolutely frightening, even if you are a fan of technology. Although adjusting to the pace of technology evolving is somehow hard and in some cases impossible, more intelligent computers might benefit human being. I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this matter.
We all have come to the point of understanding that computer science is developing very fast and it is still a new science which will be more complicated and evolved in the years coming. This will challenge every person in each society. Modern countries will benefit from this matter, for example having online government services or control traffic by robots, but developing countries who are trying hard to keep up with new technologies will be lost at some point, needless to say that educating the old people in each society even in developed countries is hard or impossible.
In addition, computers being intelligent would reduce the human work that might seem beneficial to governments but on the other hand it would make more people unemployed which will lead to poverty. Although some may say that in that case, countries will be rich enough to support their people which would bring authorities to socialism. Of course I would like to add that the idea of computers being more intelligent than people is hardly possible. Because intelligent systems tend to be evolving very fast but considering the criticality of their faults it would be impossible to completely replace human work.
Finally, in my opinion, computers being intelligent more than people will cost more than benefits. The society should be prepared and moreover adjustable to this matter in order to be successful. At last if I had a place among authorities I would think about the unemployment led from this matter but I would definitely want to benefit from it's advantages to bring people comfort and ease that they deserve.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in addition, of course, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09717868339 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84337251319 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4604510592 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330013522988 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132848297076 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751538644773 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211967540585 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255095598368 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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