Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. despite warnings, many people do not do this. what are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?
In modern scenario, technology is increasing day - by - day. Being warned from many years, researchers claim that people are not serious about the environment that they should use energy but in a limit. There are some reasons as well as some ways for protecting to environment which i will elaborate in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are some reasons behind it . The most prominent reason is that people do many things in their daily routines in which some are harmful for environment. To elaborate, people are constructing new building as well as some factories .In factories, people use machines. These machines are emitting some harmful gases. People are suffering from some harmful diseases such as asthma, heart diseases and some others. Moreover, people do farming and they are using few pesticides for better farming . As a result, they do some wrong things but they do not think about the environment.
On the other hand, there are some ways to tackle this issue . First of all, government should implement the rules as well as organize some campus. In which they can aware to people about the protection of environment . It should be compulsory that every person should go in these campus. Secondly, people should think about the environment because if they will not think about it then in future they will face some difficulties and also their children. As a result, it is very important that government and people should think about the environment.
In conclusion, although there are some reasons behind it but we cannot neglect the solution of this. Hence, if we will follow the solutions then we can save the environment and also our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63969928195 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.471855057 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4444444444 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277832493694 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944346572687 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082180471644 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177265371503 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568387570873 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.