It is undoubtedly the case that unhealthiness which is also affecting the mankind adversely. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that individuals could implement to curb this problem.
The first step is to understand why people lead a unhealthy life; even being acknowledged about the activities which could be threatfull for their lives. The first reason for this is that, in this modern world, people are so caught up in their work either men or women and do not get much time to cook food. Therefore, they preffered to eat fast food which is inevitably harmful for them.For instance, mostly youngsters rely on the outdoor food which is not fresh and healthy, therefore they have to be the prey of obesity.Moreover, parents should be really concerned about their children and they should have to reduce their dependency on the junk food.
Apart from that, science have also warned that mobile phones are the one of the biggest enemy of human health. The radio waves which are emitted from it, could be the cause of cancer and other horrible diseases.Despite knowing this, people keep it with them all the time. One best epitome of this is that, a survey was conducted by world health organisation and it revealed that number of brain problem are happen because of the radio-active waves from the mobile phone as well as, it suggested people to make use of cell phones within the limit, if they want to stay healthy.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, the health can only be improved if individuals are really worried about it. They should quit all the activities which could make their life terrible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59578721482 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8330124421 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176868219934 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746894634574 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396835461557 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104347388096 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292266912742 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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