Sending criminals to prison is not an effective method of dealing with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that education and job training can be more effective ways than prisons to deal with criminals. I partly agree with this idea.
The main reason why culprits should not be sent to prison is that there are some citizens who commit crime because they are not aware of it or they are forced to do so. For example, children under the age of eighteen who have violent behavior at school may not realize that what they are doing is wrong since they are not able to tell right from wrong. Therefore, education is the good fashion to help them foster the ability to distinguish right from wrong and prevent them from breaking laws in the future. Another case is that some criminals do not obey the laws for they are cornered. The poor-stricken people steal food or other daily necessities from others for they lack sources of income. If they are provided with job training and job opportunities, they may less likely to be thieves.
On the other hand, however, some criminals should be sentenced to jail when they have committed crime. For instance, those repeat offenders should be put in prison because education has no effect on them and the bad conditions in the jail, such as confining them to a small place, can give them a golden chance to reflect on what they have done to others or the society. Besides, felons should also be arrested in jail for a long time now that this can not only help them turn into good residents but also protect others from being hurt again.
To summarize, there is no doubt that sentencing criminals to jail is a good measure to address them. However, I still believe that the government should first provide education and job training in order to reduce the amount of crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6319218241 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33148314225 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7005003996 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279408720018 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109588024308 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712382757041 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198393557828 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670800593163 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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