Shopping is dangerous because it makes people selfish and careless with money. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, people have multifarious choices of goods. Due to this, there are various issues caused by shopping such as shopping addiction, impulsive shopping habits and selfishness. While I understand the consequences of uncontrollable shopping, I do not believe that the shopping is dangerous. I believe that as long as people can manage of their shopping habits well, the shopping is useful way to acquire goods.
As society develops, people get more of choices than in the past. As a result, people can get more possession of goods and services for comfortable lifestyles. At present, the companies are producing excessive amount of products and people are surrounding by piling of goods. Due to this, the psychological issues are inevitable.
The excessive amount of goods will cause various psychological issues. First and foremost issue is the impulsive shopping habits. People will be easily swayed by the temptation of convenient lifestyles and which can result in purchasing excessive amount of goods. This can become an addiction and can be a problem because this causes the financial issues such as bankruptcy. Furthermore, the possession of goods enhances people’s privacy and selfishness. The more goods possess, people will be more attached to those goods and this can be appeared as selfish.
The excessive and uncontrollable shopping can have psychological aspects to be considered, however, shopping itself is not dangerous. The reason for this is that, shopping is convenient and useful way to acquire goods that are necessary. For example, vacuum cleaners and washing machines are necessity items in each household and those can be acquired from performing shopping. As result of this, the controllable and thoughtful shopping is the key to this issue.
In conclusion, the shopping becomes the trend in this pilling amount of goods. Due to this, the shopping can cause psychological issues such as selfish, impulsive purchasing habits and careless. Even though there are some psychological issues for shopping, doing shopping is the necessary in daily lifestyles. Therefore, shopping is important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ever, shopping itself is not dangerous. The reason for this is that, shopping is co...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...e necessity items in each household and those can be acquired from performing shopping. A...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250659630607 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.145118733509 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12401055409 0.0946595960268 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0290237467018 0.0501214627716 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0131926121372 0.0437548338989 30% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116094986807 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0395778364116 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04390830614 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0211081794195 0.0326793684256 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100263852243 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0316622691293 0.021408717616 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00527704485488 0.011925033212 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2130.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.4156626506 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44578313253 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322289156627 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.265060240964 0.203846283523 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174698795181 0.137316102897 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04390830614 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433734939759 0.56093040696 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1808025182 60.7387585426 71% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0909090909 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.871795554 49.517814964 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.814263465372 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 47.3198247536 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.16901408451 1.69124875643 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1841163891 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133186861182 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0739038466327 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544857850915 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122590436828 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844811346083 0.134430193775 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470902966201 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.438800274002 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0756083488007 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136803179451 0.228012699653 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414919596619 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.