should all schools have the same syllabus?

Essay topics:

should all schools have the same syllabus?

It is no doubt education plays a vital role in human being life .The root can that government would provide the similar syllabus in all the schools /college and university so on.The strong opinion Co -education is backbone in our life.There are
manifold reasons.This
essay throws some light an all aspect to the see in right perspective.

The seeds to the issue multiheads.There most predominant nowadays education is very imperative part of life.Hence all people focus on the career through it can not possible without the study.Otherwise education must change in whole life through juvenile could enjoyed their student life.But also they should awareness all the modules.For instance,study , function,sport activities ,personality development extra.

Nevertheless,there are no dying my point of view all school have different quality relate to the study.Afterthat schools must provide all the abilities.For example,indoor games,outdoor games ,smart class,discipline, communication skills, well behaviour one to other a dozen and so on.Last but not the least ,some person believe that all products have not same company such as they can give a lot of profit upsurge day by day as well as they could not thought that we purchased plenty product in same the company.Therefore ,they can use only the things rather than clothes , wool clothes, make kit ,shoes extra.they can use it all the product in any items.

All said and done ,I reckon on one hand I think that government have give good facilities about the education in all the schools.on other hand every school can give good able about the study as far as syallbus .kids could not interest in their study and they do not achieve any things.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26007326007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20242883031 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.757548643 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.0 106.682146367 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 7.06120827912 467% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288736321646 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147541457618 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503241755505 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107383172515 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692942794436 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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