Should children do household chores?
Whether children should help around the house or not is one of the most hotly debated issues nowadays. Opinions on the subject are equallu divided. However, I firmly believe that children should be asked to do household chores as soon as they are able to do so.
The first important reason as far as I'm concerned is that getting children involved in doing domestic duties can teach them a massive set of life skills that will benefit their independent life in the future forever. The one thing that we all need to learn is how to run a home. After all, we all have to live somewhere. We, therefore, need to understand how to clean, how to cook, how to shop, how to budget,... For this reason, in our future, things will be much easier. We can prepare for the later life only by doing suitable household chores.
The second reason is that asking children to help with housework can teach them a sense of responsibility. In a family, every member has to do their own job. For example, father and brother are in charge of fixing things while mother usually does the shopping and cooks. Therefore, children should give a hand to express that they are responsible and independent of parents. Children can divide free time into two parts. They should spend only 30% of the free time on entertainment and the rest is for doing domestic duties. They can manage both studies and household chores easily. This teaches them how to become a qualified people and know their responsibilities in family and society.
Others who do not agree point out the potential danger involved in some household tasks. This cannot be denied but we have to remember that most task assignment is appropriate with parents taking into considerations children's age, experience and current skill level. Also, parential guidance is available if children need help. Some others do not approve of this arrangement say doing housework takes up a lot of time of children. However, children can control their spare time reasonably. They know how to make a distribution of time spent on their homework, entertainment and domestic duties. Therefore, time doesn't have an effect on children's responsibilities for doing housework.
In conclusion, it is really very essential for children to do household chores. This will certainly bring many benefits to them in many ways. Parents should also consider clearly ability and age of their children to make an appropriate task assignment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, while, after all, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94188861985 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72364270285 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523002421308 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6478242724 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5925925926 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2962962963 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18518518519 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400236103976 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10663867353 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114622039313 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266093038722 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117721108412 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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