Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?
It is believed that Historic buildings aren't useful and occupy a large space that can be exploited in a better way. They can be demolished and rebuild contemporary buildings and commercial complexes instead. On the other hand, some individuals think that these buildings are the tie with the past. For several reasons I will mention below, I agree with the people who want to preserve the historic buildings.
Firstly, conserving the historic buildings is a good mean of passing down the heritage and legacy of our ancestor's to the new generations. All these monuments portray a big picture about the nature of the life in the past, help us to know the lifestyle evolution. For example, the three pyramids in Egypt are one of the Seven Wonders of the World. Although they were built before Christ (B.C.), they still very impressive for all people even the scientists today still wondering how they were built. The future generations will be proud of their ancient Egyptian scholars.
Secondly, the tourism industry in some countries contributes a significant portion of the national income. This industry depends mainly on the historical buildings. Most tourists have a passion for knowing the history and the cultures of the other countries so this achieved only by preserving such monuments. The high influx of tourists increases the revenue which can be exploited by governments to improve the infrastructure of the country. For instance, the revenue generated from the tourism in Egypt accounts for the second large generating source of money after the tax. Therefore, the Egyptian government should invest the time and effort to preserve such buildings than build the new one.
To sum up, the cities beauty is usually enhanced by its historical monuments, it shows how the importance of the cities in the past. However the modernization is essential for the growth of the city, that doesn’t mean that old buildings should be demolished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77362055911 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8127406111 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218206273127 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662470207723 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685027651797 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145460301369 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787774348212 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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