Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Essay topics:

Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Global warming is one of the major concerns that has proliferated during the past two decades. It is recommended to the worldwide societies to step forward and to roll up their sleeves to surmount the issue of global warming. Although this problem can better be surmounted by worldwide societies, yet national level contribution is essential as well.

To initiate with, international level efforts must be taken to plummet the impact of global warming because it is a hurdle for the whole earth as it affect the environment including flora and fauna, also with human beings. That is to say, due to the draconian activities of mankind namely deforestation, emission of fossil fuels from industries and vehicles, temperature of earth is accelerated. Hence, mother earth has suffered a lot. Thus, it is the responsibility of all the nations to step forward to lessen the effects of this phenomenon.

Conversely, nationwide initiatives would also be helpful for the betterment of this scenario. Since every nation has its own environment, weather, economic conditions and natural resources. Ergo, different countries have different needs and to fulfill those exigencies, realms need to perform distinct activities. To be more Specific, first world countries are the developed ones and are more industrialized. Hence,these countries make more pollution that leads to global warming. However, third-world nations have weak economy, thus those countries hardly earn living.

To recapitulate, global warming has deleterious impact on every single organism on earth. No doubt, it would be beneficial to overcome this threat at a global level, yet national level measures should also be found.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
... ones and are more industrialized. Hence,these countries make more pollution that lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, so, third, thus, well, no doubt, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46183206107 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02259472967 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5394859006 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121278361507 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380295311699 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033733406284 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727385371986 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178017650425 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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