The line graph below shows the number of tickets to London bought from train stations in the villages of Shirholm Brockvale Signy Lee and Breadham in 2018

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The line graph below shows the number of tickets to London bought from train stations in the villages of Shirholm, Brockvale, Signy Lee and Breadham in 2018.

The line graph reveals the total amount of tickets sold at 4 train stations departing to London in 2018. Overall, both Shirholm and Brockvale station experienced an increase in ticket sales peaking by August. While less people consistently commuted from Signy Lee to London.
From January to August the sales from Brockvale rose from 10000 to a little over 14000. Simultaneously, Shirholm station followed the same upward trend, beginning at 7000 and rising to 9000. However, the following month, both stations began to see a decrease in ticket sales. Of the two, Brockvale station suffered the greatest loss, approximately 2100 less units as compared to August's figure.
Breadham station sold a record high number of 9000 tickets in January, subsequently, that value slowly dropped and dipped immensely in May to about 7900 before picking back up in August, resulting in 8000 tickets by the end of the year. In contrast, Signy Lee station never saw any significant changes in its ticketing profit. It is noted that there were miniature peaks and dips in May and September, but by December the number of tickets sold was the same as in January, roughly 3100 total.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ease in ticket sales peaking by August. While less people consistently commuted from ...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...n ticket sales peaking by August. While less people consistently commuted from Signy...
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Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun units is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d the greatest loss, approximately 2100 less units as compared to Augusts figure. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05699481865 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62201764095 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4384864851 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36991369234 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135764830216 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693390696006 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250741324244 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106571380954 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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