Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle Which of these do you prefer What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and bicycle

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle.
Which of these do you prefer?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and bicycle?

Travelling is a worldwide phenomenon. Everyone in this world use distinct mode of transport for commuting from one place to another. There are some who opt for car for their day to day travelling whereas others use bicycle. In my view bicycle is far better than the car. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of a car and a bicycle followed by a reasoned conclusion.

Considering about the benefits, multifarious merits are there of given two means of transport. Car, being a four wheeler, provide comfort and safety during the journey. That is to say, if a person is travelling by car, then he/she is sittint inside the car, like a mini cabin, on soft seats and enclosed. In this way, car can be considered as a comfortable and safer vehicle. However, benefit of bicycle cannot be denied. As it is environmental friendly. In other words, no any fuel is needed to run a bicycle. Consequently, it does no have any deletrious impact on atmosphere.

Talking about the drawbacks, a couple of demits are also there of choosing car and bicycle for travelling. One fundamental predicament of using car is that it affect negetively to the environment. To put it another way, since crude oil is required to make an automobile work; hence a car releases fumes and other hazardous gases which contaminate the air. Besides, bicycle too has some weaknesse. It does not provide safety to the commuter. A person may encounter either an accident or injury while going on a bicycle. To be more specific, a friend of mine met with an accident last year, when he was going to school on a bicycle. He was hit by a truck when he was on his way school. He got badly injured.

To recapitulate, after analysing strengths and weaknesses of car and bicycle in depth. It is evident that although car is comfortable, yet I would favor bicycle because it has no detrimental impact on earth's milieu.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r, benefit of bicycle cannot be denied. As it is environmental friendly. In other ...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...environmental friendly. In other words, no any fuel is needed to run a bicycle. Co...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...because it has no detrimental impact on earths milieu.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, talking about, in my view, in other words, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70606060606 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8236002001 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4872913388 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7083333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239896668383 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623275603345 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506164984302 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146070539331 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297268808983 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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