Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases?
Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The question of whether parents should be forced to immunize their children or not is very topical today, as so many people are worried about the safety of such practice.There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, supporters of immunisation point to the effectiveness in reducing the incidence of fatal childhood diseases of preventative medicine.In previous centuries, many children died from common illnesses, ranging from ordinary diseases such as influenza or tuberculosis to serious ones like polio or smallpox and because few people had immunity, these epidemics spread easily.As a result of widespread practice of vaccinating young children in our society, many lives have been saved and the premature mortality rate has, thankfully, been significantly reduced.
Conversely, however, opponents of immunisation say that in the present disease-free society, children who are not immunised are far less at risk as common diseases such as dysentery have long been eradicated and that immunisation programmes are therefore a waste of financial resources.Finally, there is the issue of the rights of the individual. As members of a society, why should we be obliged to subject our children to this potentially harmful practice? Some people may also be against immunisation on religious grounds and their needs must also be considered.
Overall, I feel that immunisation, with its importance in protecting the young ones, is set to remain an integral part of our lives.Of course,this is provided that the individual have the right to choose whether or not to participate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
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Suggestion: Finally
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Suggestion: Of
...to remain an integral part of our lives.Of course,this is provided that the indivi...
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Suggestion: , this
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...the individual have the right to choose whether or not to participate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, i feel, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19466872919 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.620791687 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.666666667 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301279310084 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137387409835 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461003405021 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154223989902 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912671635006 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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