should people change or not?
In the threshold of the new era, a burgeoning number of people are concerned about life adjustment. In this regard, whether should people experience changes in their lives is a controversial issue. While many people believe that changes would lead to an array of consequences, I, however, stand for the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that a person could reduce the risks in that person life by avoid changing his habits. More to the point, stay away from changes while working would deepen his knowledge in a particular field as well as create more promotion opportunities in the company. To illustrate, it is really risky if a worker, who is a breadwinner, alter his job frequently and he could not success in the new one due to the low income. Moreover, in order to conserve a nation’s cultural identity, it is necessary to limits the changes or its traditions could be faded easily.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for people to experiment changes in life. Firstly, people, especially the youngsters could create the breakthrough in their work because they would be flexible so that they would not block themselves in the safety zone and limit their abilities. Secondly, changing is a crucial factor to civilize a nation and keep the development pace with the world without living behind the time. Finally, ourlives would me more interesting and challenge if we go through a variety of experiences, a wide range of knowledge would be provided as well.
In conclusion, I strongly advocate the idea that the benefits of changing outweigh those of unchanging could supply. By transforming the routine, people would live a life that they will not regret.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8720309527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6717534775 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302034270756 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112646296626 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106175213495 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197104203612 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121895167547 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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