Essay topics: consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisments from conpeting companies. to what extent do you think are consumers influenced bay advertisments? what can be done to protect them?
In the wake of social development, adverts, especially the online ones, have become effective and efficient method tool to promote the consumerism. This essay, however, believes that the government is better to release necessary policies to protect the citizens from these. In my opinion, advertisements affect consumers both positively and negatively.
It is irrefutable that advertisements manifest in various ways such as radio, Internet, television, to many but a few. Therefore, it enhances opportunity for people in the outskirt area to approach range of products. Furthermore, adverts would explode products with their qualified features, which may probably influence decision-making in consuming habit. To illustrate, Electrolux with its decently qualified washing machine has been a trustworthy brand-name for buyers worldwide thank to wide coverage of advertisement industry. The Electrolux washing machine is profoundly outstanding; therefore, it started gaining faith from customer it the first trial use. That is to say, introducing product through advertisement is a win-win situation both to consumers and manufacturers.
Despite its plus, adverts still have detrimental effect. Firstly, it confuses housewives since there are some cases where the effects and functions of products are being exaggerated. Consequently, it leads to mistrust from both direct and indirect customer. Secondly, children will always be the prevalent target while laughing advertisements. As the matter of course, they are easily to convince and monitor rather than caregivers. Last but not least, the misleading information triggers the confusion in exploiting and consuming products. Let take formula milk as a particular example. The consumerism has been affected by the illusion of formula milk, thus, they unavoidably deny function of breastfeeding. Generally, the degree of influenced by adverts differs from person to person.
As natural sequel, if the governments wish to protect their citizens, they are better to cencor and supervise strictly on the adverts. The origin and the quality of the products, which are advertised should be fully checked before getting to the customers. Moreover , they should control the broadcasting time of adverts such as the junk food so that it could only appear at night when all of the youngsters are not awake.Hence, this negative eating habits could be deleted.
In conclusion, people would be affected by both advantagous and disadvantegous results from adverts so the governments should have the solution to vanish the detrimental ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72135416667 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16103362537 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7251923732 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8636363636 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16871228856 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435715609259 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399159597166 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856624566244 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362050266909 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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