Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
An education is gaining maximum traction among the all countries.many may say, that selection of classes are giving an opportunity to the students or it required to choose the same classes as everyone. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of each approach with many worthwhile reasons.
At first, students should be permitted to the selection of their classes. In the positive side of this phenomenon is a student is highly interested in the study. If students can select their own class, they become enormous successful in their life. For example, a few students selected their class like as sport and they are very interested in the sport; therefore, they are becoming famous and successful on this planet. In the negative point of view, if students selecte the wrong class and they are boring in the selected class, they fail in their study.
Secondly, schools are not giving an opportunity to students for self selection of the class. In the profits of this proposal is students are studying in the proper ways with discipline and they can achieve extra knowledge from the other students. For instance, children are confusing in a few educational topics and they need some help for the further knowledge of these topics; therefore, they can learn from the other classmates. In the opposite side, students cannot take proper education because they are disturbing from the other students.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of the student should be permitted to take their classes or they be demanded to select the same classes as the other students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...aximum traction among the all countries.many may say, that selection of classes are givi...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...profits of this proposal is students are studying in the proper ways with discipl...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...annot take proper education because they are disturbing from the other students. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09022556391 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75172818926 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484962406015 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3611285048 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365069540314 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148120585981 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863999185125 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252439008505 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829980751748 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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