should woman be reponsible for children misbehavior ?
In the threshold of the new era, a burgeoning number of people are concerned about the adolescent law-breaking. In this regard, whether women should be blamed for these behaviors due to their status change in the recent years is a controversial issue. While many people believe that this is the female’s responsibility, I however, stand for the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that, the lack of parents care is the reason that directly lead to juvenile misbehaviors, however, this duty should be shared among parents, not only women. In this modern world, in order not to hinge on family finance, both genders must work to earn their own living, therefore, the obligation to take care of children is equally belongs to the fathers and mothers. Furthermore, the myth that “men make houses, women make homes” is no longer the general rule due to the fact that women could become the breadwinners and raise their family as a whole successfully. To illustrate, Hillary Clinton- one of the most powerful women in the world, who stand up to promote the fairness toward both genders is a great example.
More to the point, juvenile delinquency mostly happens among adolescent because they are neither children nor adults, but they lack experience and knowledge about their mental, physical, social development and society. As a result, the Internet in this technology-driven world might causes detrimental effects on them easily as a consequence of not being censored and supervised. Additionally, even if they are strictly managed by parents but living in a hazardous environment, they could not refrain them from disobey.
In conclusion, I advocate the idea that youngsters’ misbehavior are resulted from many factors and man should also be responsible for his children actions as well. By doing so, the adolescent would be roundly develope in the right way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20792079208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01537123781 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3289859973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188583901531 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659849745372 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079665357946 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128164582742 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896590822444 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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