Single young people in many countries leave their parents for study and job and live somewhere else. Does this trend have more advantages than disadvantages?
The importance of living away from parents for study and job was always debatable and now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. Here, I would like to mention that this trend has more advantages than disadvantages.
To commence with, the first and foremost advantage is that toddlers become independent if they leave their parents and live alone. To epitome, juveniles learn to manage their household chores like cooking, washing clothes and so on while living away from their family. They learn to manage their expenses and also do part-time jobs in order to fulfil their bread and butter. They also develop skills to face difficult challenges of life. Consequently, offsprings become reliant by learning how to manage themselves. In addition, young ones not only get supreme education but also job opportunities. To explicate, they get more superior chances to show their talent if they live away from their parents in other metropolitican cities. They can learn better in big cities as cities provide superior education amenities. Eventually, children make holistic development while living away from parents.
Further emphasizing on the points of advantages, living away from home allows youngsters to enjoy their personal freedom. To demonstrate, they can enjoy their life to the fullest if they live away from parents. They can watch late night movies with their friends and go out without any restriction and can meet new people according to their desire. Children who live away thus get more benefits. On the contrary, it has darker side too.
To embark with, children lack social, moral support from their family members. To illustrate, young blood who remain away from their parents cannot get support in case they face any failure in life. Sometimes, they suffer homesickness, health problems during extreme pressure of studies. Hence, they remain deprived off their parents love and may face depression. What is more, some children get into bad habits of abusing drugs as they get the company of friends who are addicted to morphines and other drugs. Due to bad company, they also start taking drugs and hence, destroy their future.
To recapitulate, undeniably living from parents have several drawbacks. However, in my perception, the merits of this trend outweigh its demerits.
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Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in addition, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29367088608 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62783834539 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564556962025 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6462350047 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.64 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250365456028 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728269454882 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621713759219 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159264569112 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758866399854 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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