Single young people in many countries leave their parents for study and job and live somewhere else. Does this trend have more advantages than disadvantages?
The importance of living away from parents for study and job was always debatable and now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. Here, I would like to mention that this trend has more advantages than disadvantages.
To commence with, the first and foremost advantage is that toddlers become independent if they leave their parents and live alone. To epitome, juveniles learn to manage their household chores like cooking, washing clothes and so on while living away from their family. They learn to manage their expenses and also do part-time jobs in order to fulfil their bread and butter. They also develop skills to face difficult challenges of life. Consequently, offsprings become reliant by learning how to manage themselves. In addition, young ones not only get supreme education but also job opportunities. To explicate, they get more superior chances to show their talent if they live away from their parents in other metropolitican cities. They can learn better in big cities as cities provide superior education amenities. Eventually, children make holistic development while living away from parents.
Further emphasizing on the points of advantages, living away from home allows youngsters to enjoy their personal freedom. To demonstrate, they can enjoy their life to the fullest if they live away from parents. They can watch late night movies with their friends and go out without any restriction and can meet new people according to their desire. Children who live away thus get more benefits. On the contrary, it has darker side too.
To embark with, children lack social, moral support from their family members. To illustrate, young blood who remain away from their parents cannot get support in case they face any failure in life. Sometimes, they suffer homesickness, health problems during extreme pressure of studies. Hence, they remain deprived off their parents love and may face depression. What is more, some children get into bad habits of abusing drugs as they get the company of friends who are addicted to morphines and other drugs. Due to bad company, they also start taking drugs and hence, destroy their future.
To recapitulate, undeniably living from parents have several drawbacks. However, in my perception, the merits of this trend outweigh its demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26519337017 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72521897711 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.276802438 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29727145319 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105798446981 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767788438 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236605315051 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640141510494 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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