Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter are observed to have more negative effects than positive being more useful for the criminals than others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Social media has been one of the most amazing inventions of this century.Some people think that it has more disadvantages than advantages. Especially, as it is more useful to criminals.I partially agree with this statement.
Social media has been a boon in many ways. Networking sites like Facebook,Twitter etc. have transformed the way we interact. Also, share and communicate. for example ,I connected with my childhood friends who are all over the world. That too after 30 yrs and we had a school reunion. We are also connected with our family and are able to keep in touch with them constantly. And also be a part of family functions like weddings etc. Social media has helped in alleviating communication gap. Especially, between people in remote areas . They have provided a rapid and effective way of interaction between them. It has also helped in fighting injustice and taking up social causes.
However, networking sites have their drawbacks also.People have become disjointed and self centered . Because they are spending more time in front of their laptops,mobiles etc. Hence as a result are lacking in social skills. Since we are sharing a lot of our personal information,photographs etc. Also, there is a risk of it being misused by criminals.There are people who are trolling others. Which at times can have detrimental effects.There are people with fake accounts enticing young girls and boys. It leads to causing fraud relationships and mental trauma.
I would like to conclude by saying that social media has positively revolutionized the way we communicate. Especially, in the past few decades.However, while using it we need to be privacy and security conscious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, so, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21323529412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2852635314 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4589915926 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.652173913 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8260869565 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.47826086957 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201567656023 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511774257882 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528889191354 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128196292544 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667045419585 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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