Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Fully functional and safe environment to live are mandatory for life exixtance. In oder to achieve it , rules and laws play a pivotal role. If such regulations and restrictions were to be excluded, one can act according to one'sfree will. In my honest opinion such deeds could cause detrimental effects for both individual and society
The ways of our lives are governed by laws of nature. Nothing in this world can withstand against its force; likewise , man made rules and laws are essential for a peacefull co-exixtance, without a societ can implode. For instance, considering the pandemic situatins , new laws were passed for wearing masks in all public places. Without such law , the problm might have blown out of control. Additionally, if individuals were allowed to act freely, nobody would have followed home quarantine and social distancing strateges. These rules imposed upon were proved to be satisfactory , moreover mandatory.
Even before pandemic, looking into law and oder perspective, rules , laws and punishments for breaking it played a supreme role in maintaining harmony in a society. Individual minds can work in mysterious ways under stress. For instance, if dispute arises between parties , they can go to any extremr to slove their issues. To prevent the occurance of any henious act under such circumstances, nothing dubious about the part played by the police stations and court. Laws were passed by the government or supreme bodies for the well being of general public, however the police and other officials make sure they are being followed.
Rules always descipline a individual, without it success is mere a mirage. As a society, rules mold it as a safe and sustainable one , where people can live ,grow peacefully without any fear. Mutual respect and love can florish under controlled environment for the future betterment. Thus essentiating its need to be present in a society .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es mold it as a safe and sustainable one , where people can live ,grow peacefully ...
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... sustainable one , where people can live ,grow peacefully without any fear. Mutual...
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...ting its need to be present in a society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20779220779 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85774470754 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0840525907 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125792188834 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041975612197 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239416623191 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829795169829 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253760423856 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.