Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Fundamentally, resident compulsory to have some prevision and jus because human without regulation will doing everything what they want. I totally agree with this notion and think that each person should be brings regulation in ther own life.
Firstly, every country have regulation and all inhabitants should be obey with this. In other words, regulation made by government to kept stability of the nation and respect each human. Thereby, equilibrium between person will be protected and can't to made something that can made harming to another people. For instance, many people prefer to do violence by social media or face to face because some people think that is just joke, while with the regulation from government made perpetrator became scared. Thats why regulation is one of the most important in life because without this safety of someone will be dangerous.
Secondly, jus bringing welfare to resident life. On the other hand, besides importance of instructions, jus very helping every single person to get some happiness or comfortable to live. Moreover, each jus that prevailing in region will be affective to contend any harshnees and able to giving sanction to who made something wrong. For example, Indonesia will be giving jus to employment, who doing corruption with the sanction as entire prison or fine around onto 100 million rupiahs. Thus, for them that want to do deviating will be consider about the consequence.
To conclude, regulation and jus giving bravery to each person to do something well and benefecial. In my opinion, combination of two this things is one of the best methods to making resident feeling convenient.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...s because human without regulation will doing everything what they want. I totally ag...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'obeyed'?
Suggestion: obeyed
...egulation and all inhabitants should be obey with this. In other words, regulation m...
^^^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ernment made perpetrator became scared. Thats why regulation is one of the most impor...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cial. In my opinion, combination of two this things is one of the best methods to ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19101123596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73832209373 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2334054151 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116872187896 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454370983407 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544126368808 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867695631737 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411377895394 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...s because human without regulation will doing everything what they want. I totally ag...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'obeyed'?
Suggestion: obeyed
...egulation and all inhabitants should be obey with this. In other words, regulation m...
^^^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ernment made perpetrator became scared. Thats why regulation is one of the most impor...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cial. In my opinion, combination of two this things is one of the best methods to ma...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19101123596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73832209373 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2334054151 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116872187896 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454370983407 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544126368808 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867695631737 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411377895394 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.