Some peopl believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matter that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sparring views among parents about bring up children ceaselessly become hot issues. Some people consider that granting permit to younster for making decision in life such as determining provision, garments, even creation will being a self-centred person, while others oppose this because Make decisions according to their wishes will effective to erecting positiv energy in their life. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Liberating youngster in social life to determine their way is the best way to set up spirit in their life. In other words, through this methods, many youngster become smart people to solving problem and Become a responsible leader. For instance, Maudy Ayunda is one of the best influencer in Indonesia and she deserved a lot of awards, few years ago she told in public that since she child her parents always asked herself to made a decision and as a result now she can handle everything even she free to selected what she want to do such as want to eat something, use wear, and sometimes she got feature to went some destination. Thats why, each matter come to life is easily to settle it because parents put big trust in life to tackle all troubles.
On the other hand, not everyone agrees to let their child make a choice by their self. Moreover, majority of people fear if their child will become someone that only thinking about their self without caring situation around them. Furthermore, majority of rich their life has been organised by their parents until just following the path that his parents created. As illustration, Rafthar derived from rich family and he has baby sitter to organised all he need such as his food, and his food was settled by his parrents correspond to option by his parents. So, sometimes child will intricate to grasp some condition in their environment.
To conclude, children have the right to make choices in their lives. In my opinion, combination between this statements is the best methods to yields youngster that can give big impact to next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93604651163 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54592751079 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2997556766 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227124991426 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838291551194 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681257979931 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134747404721 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529905690662 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.