Today's schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowdays education centre demanded to give knowledge about survival of financial in this earth. I completely disagree with this statement and think that the best way to young children for life not based on financial but in another methods.
First of all, the pupil is dependents of their parents. Every perents in the world have a milliom dream and put on the shoulder of their child and everything the child want their parents will give it. Moreover, the parents want to being the best parents in the world and because of that they are wan't their children thinking about money or something that can make depression. For instance, several of child want to have a lot money and get by their self, but their parents not granted, my cousin was very wealth and she always said she want to be independent woman, on the other hand her parents always said what she want just tell them the reason why her parents do this because they want her child become a smart people and sucsess in future. That's why when pupil decide to study in some school theory about money is important but don't encourage them to do it.
Secondly, children should be focus with their leason. Even if the child have a lot of money those achieved by their self that can guarantee if they are not focus in school. In other words, they only thinking about money and busy with their activity to get money, consequently their study being left behind. For example, when i in primary school i have many friend with different characters, at that time my friend skipping class without reason in the fact she exist in centre city to sell toys it means she prefer to worked than studied, it is one of the most reason why parents forbid their son or daughter to get some job when they are during at school because that make not concentrate. Thus, know about financial is very important for prompt welfare of life but the time is not perfect when the pupil at school, we can tell to them about money but only a bit and don't to much because the impact can changed their mindset.
In conclusion, in the world many ways to survival without mitigating Loss of time that should be used to seek knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...was very wealth and she always said she want to be independent woman, on the other h...
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Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...r hand her parents always said what she want just tell them the reason why her paren...
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Line 2, column 734, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...child become a smart people and sucsess in future. Thats why when pupil decide to study i...
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Line 2, column 745, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e a smart people and sucsess in future. Thats why when pupil decide to study in some ...
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Line 2, column 833, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ool theory about money is important but dont encourage them to do it. Secondly, chi...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...to do it. Secondly, children should be focus with their leason. Even if the child ha...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'many friends'.
Suggestion: many friends
...xample, when i in primary school i have many friend with different characters, at that time...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'exists'.
Suggestion: exists
...ng class without reason in the fact she exist in centre city to sell toys it means sh...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...n centre city to sell toys it means she prefer to worked than studied, it is one of th...
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Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to them about money but only a bit and dont to much because the impact can changed ...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...hem about money but only a bit and dont to much because the impact can changed the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53984575835 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2245521746 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462724935733 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.554145089 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9230769231 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178517667905 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786638733197 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329100013972 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123826609424 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369270677982 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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