There is no doubt that using solar energy as a source of household energy in many countries around the world is becoming more popular. while some people use the electrical energy in their houses because they are used to use it, others prefer to use the solar energy to help in the international energy shortage problem. I will discuss the two arguments and I will support the latter view.
Firstly, some people depend on the electrical energy in their lives without using the solar energy. This is because they are in low level of culture and they are feel unconfident using it. To illustrate, they think that they couldn't deal with its damaged cases and may be it is expensive. In contrast, if they bought the solar system, they will face problems.
On the other hand, it is clear that using renewable energy become worldwide demand because its source is the sun light which is a permanent source and costless. As a consequence, it encourage the families to buy the solar system and connect it in their buildings. For example, they can use this energy in heating water, air conditional and lightening which reduces their monthly financial price. They only buy the solar system and pay the monthly commitment. On the contrary, they should pay expensive energy monthly bill. Moreover, this solar energy is clean, safe and help the worldwide energy shortage problem.
In conclusion, whereas low part of people use the ordinary electrical energy, the greater part start taking the benefits of the solar energy. In my opinion, I support the last view in saving the worldwide energy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...und the world is becoming more popular. while some people use the electrical energy i...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to using'.
Suggestion: used to using
...energy in their houses because they are used to use it, others prefer to use the solar ener...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...it. To illustrate, they think that they couldnt deal with its damaged cases and may be ...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...couldnt deal with its damaged cases and may be it is expensive. In contrast, if they b...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...urce and costless. As a consequence, it encourage the families to buy the solar system an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90334572491 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47562989638 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505576208178 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5995749824 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265939631878 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102177258208 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151679971005 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157586666232 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127634623099 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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