Some believe that sports plays the vital role for the society, others however think that it isn’t more than just a leisure activity.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this fast growing generation, young people are interested in sports and it plays an important role in their life and it also benefits them for building physical strength and fitness, and making their career in field of sports.However, many people believe that the sports activity is not important but it just leisure activity. In my opinion, I think that, sports are important part of life as it help mankind in many ways to stay fit and also it is one type of source of income for some of them.
On the one hand, contemporary technology has improved so offspring are very interested in the plethora of sports activity such as cricket and football and all. moreover, sports activity is important for the younger generation because of playing sport improving cognitive skill and build physical strength and healthy fitness. Also, the youth people are playing athletes game such as international and national sports so they improve skil and aptitude and personality and knowledge.In addition to this , they also learn good leadership skills as they know how to lead their teams and also influence other people to play various kind of sports. For instance, Saniya Mirza is the best badminton player and also she inspire the plethora of people for playing sports.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks of playing sports are not good for them. Firstly, some people are found to be involved in some scandles or malicious activities like match-fixing and controversial activity so that is bad effects for people who are inspired by them and also they lose their confidence level and dimotivate by their own self. Secondly, once they lost their confidence and self respect then they would lost their fame and name and also there would be chances of them to take wrong track. For example, once they lose everything then they start taking drugs to forgot about that things and by watching them there might be chances that their fans also do the same thing as they do.
In recapitulation, sport activity is major part of their life ,i believe that sport is very important for the stay healthy lifestyle and also entertainment however there are some drawback for negative impact in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ty however many people believe that the sports activity is not important but it just l...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... and knowledgeIn addition they are also learn good leadership skills as they know how...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rt activity is major part of their life i believe that sport is very important fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.984375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55446721145 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45625 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 320.0 20.2975951904 1577% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1595.0 106.682146367 1495% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 320.0 20.7667163134 1541% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277030387256 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.277030387256 0.084324248473 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197079735779 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07997373946 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.0 13.0946893788 1237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -253.32 50.2224549098 -504% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.47 8.58950901804 262% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.0 10.1190380762 1285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 130.0 10.7795591182 1206% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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