Some believe that sports plays the vital role for the society, others however think that it isn’t more than just a leisure activity.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Submitted by Patel Romaa on Mon, 04/12/2021 - 03:03
Around the World today, youth people are interested in sports level and it is a very important role of the playing sports and it also benefits for the build physical strength and fitness moreover, some people think that playing sports it is a vital role for community however, many people believe that the sports activity is not important but it just leisure activity. In my opinion, I agree with the former one because outdoor activity is very helpful for a healthy lifestyle.
On the one hand, contemporary technology has improved so offspring are very interested in the plethora of sports activity such as cricket and football and all. moreover, sports activity is important for the younger generation because of playing sport improving cognitive skill and build physical strength and healthy fitness. Also, the youth people are playing athletes game such as international nad national sports so they improve skil and aptitude and they are shown your personality and knowledge.In addition, they are also learn good leadership skills as they know how to lead their teams and also influence by other people. for instance, Saniya Mirza is the best sports playing player she is the best idols for many people.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks for youth people playing sports are not good for them.moreover some people are found to be involved in some scandles or malicious activities like match-fixing and controversial activity so that is bad effects for people and also lose their confidence level and dimotivate by their own self and also do not focus on their academic side and also future they are harmful by self to plying such hazardous games so they negative impact in life and health.
In recirculation sport activity is major part of their.i believe that sport is very important for the stay healthy lifestyle and also entertainment however there are some drawback for negative impact in their life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Submitted by Patel Romaa on Mon 04122021 0303 Around the World today youth peopl...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ty however many people believe that the sports activity is not important but it just l...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... and knowledgeIn addition they are also learn good leadership skills as they know how...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89531680441 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49301401566 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468319559229 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 363.0 20.2975951904 1788% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1777.0 106.682146367 1666% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 363.0 20.7667163134 1748% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317979804606 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317979804606 0.084324248473 377% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161401304635 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107276209729 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 183.1 13.0946893788 1398% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -288.51 50.2224549098 -574% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 143.7 11.3001002004 1272% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.64 8.58950901804 287% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 147.2 10.1190380762 1455% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Submitted by Patel Romaa on Mon 04122021 0303 Around the World today youth peopl...
^^
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ty however many people believe that the sports activity is not important but it just l...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... and knowledgeIn addition they are also learn good leadership skills as they know how...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89531680441 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49301401566 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468319559229 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 363.0 20.2975951904 1788% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1777.0 106.682146367 1666% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 363.0 20.7667163134 1748% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317979804606 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317979804606 0.084324248473 377% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161401304635 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107276209729 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 183.1 13.0946893788 1398% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -288.51 50.2224549098 -574% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 143.7 11.3001002004 1272% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.64 8.58950901804 287% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 147.2 10.1190380762 1455% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.