Some believe success in life comes from hard work, determination and motivation. While many believe success depends on other important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.
Success has crucial position in our life. Recent days some of the people consider that keys to success are to work hard and willpower, but the rest of the people think that important thing is money and physical image. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and conclude with my personal opinion.
To begin with, some people claim that with money and outward, you can be successful. They believe that if they have money, they can have a solution to any issue. For the first, money helps you in some situations, but not always. For instance, if you want to have success, you should have enough knowledge and education. Secondly, appearance can lead to success, if only you are in fashion or in art industry. To be clearly, well-dressed and attractive models always captivate spectators. So that, their future is bright and they may achieve success soon.
On the other hand, working hard and having willpower are primary reasons for succeeding. Firstly, not everyone are lucky that to born in a wealthy family or having good appearance. That is why, they should study and work entirely hard. Secondly, success do not always comes without determination. If you want to achieve something, you should step some difficulties and tolerate to problems.
By way of conclusion, nowadays people have their own thoughts of which factors bring success. From my perspective, money and other factors may be vital, but it can not lead us to successful life. Instead, we can really feel pleased ourselves when we achieve our life aims.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ucial position in our life. Recent days some of the people consider that keys to success ar...
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Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ss both viewpoints and conclude with my personal opinion. To begin with, some people claim th...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...y helps you in some situations, but not always. For instance, if you want to have succ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94573643411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59350698261 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8560405418 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8888888889 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261881394659 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789058101867 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530843816774 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163533458238 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454116537095 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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