Some believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree?
"Money often costs too much". One of the most controversial issues relates to that, should people give their Hardly earned money; to the government or not? I totally agree with this question and, I am going to shape up my opinion with some examples and assertions.
To crown it all, it is possible to say that in country like india; which is on the path of development. However, there are many people in india who are still below poverty line. Similarly, they do not get proper basic needs whereas, it becomes difficult for them to pay the tax. Moreover, taxation policy has been made for people welfare but when the benefits are incomplete, likewise; only rich people are getting the advantages for paying tax but not the poor one's. For example, In India; poor people suffer from alot of problems and different types of issues due to less attention paid by government on poor people.
Secondly, the people who are underdeveloped not getting proper facilities which have been provided by the government. Similarly, they all are suffering alot whereas, rich people are relaxed and enjoying their lifestyle. For instance, in india; in many states people suffer from issues such as, poor education facilities, health facilities are less and unemployment. Additionally, indian cinema is also taking initiative for making government aware on these topics by making movies like 'nayak' which revealed the condition among distressed people.
I pen down saying that, there are number of answers to this question. However; I tend to believe that, either people who are poor, should be provided proper benefits or they should be allowed for not paying tax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...are number of answers to this question. However; I tend to believe that, either people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63623805898 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1283654574 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196177408008 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630738469636 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720337044826 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123717414484 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522805477105 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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