Some children find some subjects as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times subjects where you have to count have been hard to understand almost for everyone. However, certain part of children believe that subjects such as math and philosophy quite difficult to learn, while others think that those subjects ought to be optional rather than obligatory. I strongly agree with the statement that those subjects must be obligatory.
First of all, these lessons are so helpful for brain and their activity. It means that while your mind is working for wear, you are going to be much smarter. Therefore, when your brains are working, your mind activity is going to grow and you can suit enormous amount of information. Thus, math and philosophy gives to young children a big boost with their mind activity.
Second of all, without subjects than I mentioned, children cannot leave due to the fact that they would not count and they would not have thoughts about something that is beyond our mind. In other words, their brain skills are going to diminish. Likewise in the future they will have abundant troubles at work or with usual things in each life. Hence, without those subjects the life will be much more difficult than with these subjects.
To conclude I believe that subjects such as math and philosophy gives to brain a lot of unique and really crucial skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...eir brain skills are going to diminish. Likewise in the future they will have abundant t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87443946188 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32439308064 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565022421525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2751606767 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223597825211 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834958647518 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818333492093 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135816230234 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917731057242 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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