Some children find some subjects as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. Do you agree or disagree?
In all times subjects where you have to count have been hard to understand almost for everyone. However, certain number of people believes that subjects such as math and philosophy are quite difficult to learn, therefore those subjects ought to be optional rather than obligatory. I strongly disagree with the statement that those subjects must be mandatory.
First of all, these lessons are so helpful for brain and its activity. It means that while your mind is working to its full potential, you are going to be much smarter. Therefore, when your brains are working, your mind activity is going to grow and you can absorb enormous amount of information. Thus, math and philosophy give to young children a big boost with their mind activity.
Second of all, without subjects that I mentioned, children cannot live due to the fact that they would not count and they would not have thoughts regarding something that is beyond our mind. In other words, their brain skills are going to diminish. Likewise in the future they will have abundant troubles at work or with usual things in each life. Hence, without those subjects the life will be much more difficult than with these disciplines.
To conclude I believe that subjects such as math and philosophy provide a human’s brain with a lot of unique and really crucial skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95111111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44060304226 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6027503174 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223524690921 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827557521865 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859622862439 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135167283948 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987939863305 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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